details are what make it a better story-at least, in my opinion. XVideos Think about how you’d tell this story if you were in a room full of inquisitive and like minded people – you’d start slow, and build up to a conclusion by filling up your story with descriptions so your listeners would be able to imagine being you in this story. The execution, however, is terrible. The basic premise of the story is actually decent. If you want your readers to not flee in disgust when suddenly reality is violated, then state from the beginning that your character will be “super.” Otherwise, when you state it later it seems like a cheap cop out.«12» Think about how you’d tell this story if you were in a room full of
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