I suggest that you try to get a cohesive story to tie all the parts together, that is if you plan on making several more stories. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-12-27 10:52:20great story
hot. redtube I found that character development through a cohesive story is really what keeps the stories good and going, and it helps you stay focused and effective as a writer.READERReport 2005-06-15 17:31:36gay.«1» Your story characters are classy.READERReport 2005-06-23 01:16:21I enjoyed both of your stories very much and It seems that you and your guy are really in love. 😉 have a good one and keep up the good work.READERReport 2005-06-15 23:18:23You have the talent for writing stories. same thing happened to me and wife, but neighbor joined in for orgy, once a week for 5 years
3d couple finally joined.READERReport 2005-06-23 19:39:18Excellent story.
