luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. Bokepindo never post a copy of a story without deleteing the original first.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 03:17:47I could barely read this. luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. It needs significant grammar and spelling revisions.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-01 23:22:52the question marks are a little annoyin but stuff like this happens to a lot of peoples stories on here when there published. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 21:58:07needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER using a GOOD EDITOR not a hack like you.
