One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! Porn hub One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! 6.5/10READERReport 2007-02-17 01:36:06There is such a thing as a spell checker…USE IT!!! Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-06-12 13:02:38Go Marines! It could be a lot better. You’re doing good. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-06-12 13:02:38Go Marines! Even though it didn’t have any sex it in it, it was still extremely good! You need to kill him off and let her find her mother.«12» And to the commenter named Zatch2, it’s not “Definatley, it’s “Definitely.” Learn how to spell before sounding like a writers critic.READERReport 2007-02-17 04:33:43Definatley needs a conclusion.
