All writers need someone to proof read their stores.READERReport 2006-06-22 16:21:30What do you mean sentences end wuth periods not commas? also sentences end with a period not a comma. Japanese sex not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. Thanks for the advce, check back with me in the future, I’ll put it to good use.READERReport 2006-06-16 00:17:33wheres the s&m?«12» ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it.
