1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. XNXX Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going.
