It will also flow better. It is hard to read as is.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-02 18:44:43Who cars bout the fuckin grammer it was a good storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-19 23:07:45great story, but if you work on your geammer, and diction, it will be easier to understand the intended meaning of what you are writting. Pornhub 31 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-05 17:57:48i didnt read because of grammer so i scimmed through it and its great but improve grammer and split it into paragraphsanonymous readerReport 2012-02-17 23:42:30Break it up into paragraphs. markAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-07 21:14:25too many haters…was a good read and a hot fuck«12345» It is hard to read as is.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-02 18:44:43Who cars bout the fuckin grammer it was a good storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-19 23:07:45great story, but if you work on your geammer, and diction, it will be easier to understand
