Not bad, add some character decsription that you can refer back to in the sex, e.g. XXX just like a lil bug in da rug… This is another story of yours that reminds me of my one and only cyber master and myself. she writes her stories and turns men on.. Describe more in next one the ending . …READERReport 2005-09-23 05:21:41Don’t stop writing ! 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-01 16:07:16A nice story, keep writing. old”… watching the world from a deep… Describe more in next one the ending . …READERReport 2005-09-23 05:21:41Don’t stop writing ! Work on it and you’ll go from 6 to 8!«1» This is another story of yours that reminds me of my one and only cyber master and myself.
