5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 10:37:50ok a decent start to the story so far, enjoying itAnonymous readerReport 2013-05-29 18:40:14chapter 3 is also now up for you all and that has some fun stuff in it for all you horn dogs out thereAnonymous readerReport 2013-05-29 15:36:52thanks I do do the writing outside of the browser interface but when i bring it in I don’t know why but sometimes I loose punctuation for some reason. Brazzers so if you see a run on that looks like it should be 2 sentences imagine a period somewhere cause it was there when I wrote it. The story is going good and looks like it will be enjoyable.
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George Uhl
