7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. Desi sex Has therefore to be a negative rating regardless of the unread contents
WWanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:07:28It was good just to me it seemed like one big whole sentence. Has therefore to be a negative rating regardless of the unread contents
WWanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:07:28It was good just to me it seemed like one big whole sentence. And adding more details to make it longer would also help. Has therefore to be a negative rating regardless of the unread contents
WWanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:07:28It was good just to me it seemed like one big whole sentence.
