2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 21:36:36Life may be shit BUT so is this story – or are you a poor wee lad who didn’t graduate PRIMARY SCHOOL. Desi sex Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 21:36:36Life may be shit BUT so is this story – or are you a poor wee lad who didn’t graduate PRIMARY SCHOOL. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. I only comment about spelling and grammer, if it brings the story down. It could be a great story. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words
