21 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-21 04:16:47This is the first story on here I’ve actually been interested in the actual story rather than using it as a starter for my fantasies. Well done.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 04:14:55Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatanonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 03:24:04Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatwordytomReport 2008-11-07 17:47:13Suggestion, if you wish to try stream of consciousness writing, make it flow smoothly. Brazzers For the amateur writer it is best to stick with straight narrative and let the story unroll event at a time. 21 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-21 04:16:47This is the first story on here I’ve actually been interested in the actual story rather than using it as a starter for my fantasies.
