you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. XNXX . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … it is ruining the story line… it is ruining the story line… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. it is ruining the story line… it is ruining the story line… no more incest… it is ruining the story line… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. You need more segues between events.«1» no more incest… You need more segues between events.«1» Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… You need more segues between events.«1» this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter.
