9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-07 21:57:22go back to school and learn to write properly. But don’t feel too bad, 2 other commentors on here have done just as bad… eporner i am a new writer so im sorry for any mistakes (including grammar) that i have and probably will make. also the minimum between kids is safely 10 -11 monthsshrdbayleeReport 2012-08-01 12:13:02you are all right (except for the me being 10 years old lol) i just wanted the both of them to be close in age,but i didn’t want them to be twins. i am a new writer so im sorry for any mistakes (including grammar) that i have and probably will make. you should be ashamed of your self for posting a story in this condition.
