8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-28 02:35:20nice job, a bit quick in the pace but nice.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 22:56:11I thought you did a great job man keep them coming!!!thecontrol100Report 2013-02-27 20:52:11cant wait to read the rest great start to hopefully a great chain storyanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 16:04:14Great story, i hope there will be moreanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 13:28:39loved it,looking forward to more,just need it a little longer«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-28 02:35:20nice job, a bit quick in the pace but nice.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 22:56:11I thought you did a great job man keep them coming!!!thecontrol100Report 2013-02-27 20:52:11cant wait to read the rest great start to hopefully a great chain storyanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 16:04:14Great story, i hope there will be moreanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 13:28:39loved it,looking forward to more,just need it a little longer«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-28 02:35:20nice job, a bit quick in the pace but
