perhaps if you sorted those simple mistakes(that you should have checked for before submitting) this story could be more interesting, although for me personally id rather legal age, so maybe put young in the header or something. Desi sex good luck with any future stories«1» good luck with any future stories«1» like you say shes in the grade below you yet your almost 18 and shes 13? 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-18 17:11:461704 i like ur story dont u jus love sex? uhhhhhh its so tasty especially little slutsanonymous readerReport 2010-09-04 18:20:20well there are obvious mistakes in the story, spelling is a bit shocking. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-18 17:11:461704 i like ur story dont u jus love sex? uhhhhhh its so tasty especially little slutsanonymous readerReport 2010-09-04 18:20:20well there are obvious mistakes in the story, spelling is
