A good story has to be told in a way that’s believable. xhamster Furthermore, a sister being caught with the family dog’s cock buried in her cunt and fucking her doesn’t just smile amiably and say “Come here.” She’d be scared shitless for being busted. Pretend that someone else wrote it and actively look for flaws. A good story has to be told in a way that’s believable. When you can’t find any, it’s ready to be submitted.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-20 22:02:13wasn’t bad for your first oneAnonymous readerReport 2009-04-24 00:14:53More detail needed and needs better endingAnonymous readerReport 2009-04-23 01:34:54NO GOOD!!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-22 19:08:58more detail and a little longer please, also you should try to include the mother in the next story that would be super hot«123» When you can’t find any, it’s ready to be submitted.Anonymous
