Keep writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-19 13:34:24ok but to short this was a lousey place to end it also since the mom was home she sure would have heard all the screaming it would have been better if she asked to go camping with him then they screwed at the camp site keep it beleivable and realistic please«1» Even you can start it from now and take your sister to camping and explore some more experiences you would like to share… redtube Even you can start it from now and take your sister to camping and explore some more experiences you would like to share… either do it right or not at all now delete and rewrite.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 18:10:26ANOTHER WANNABE WRITER THAT PROMISES A PART TWO BUT FAILS TO DELIVERanonymous readerReport 2010-08-19 15:07:44I was also
