If your story is about a pool party, get laid in or around the pool. go out and practice, skippy, and then come back and try to write something worth reading.READERReport 2007-11-18 16:13:13Good build up, but it ended up finishing far too quick«12» I agree: “Nice beginning, but ending sucked”. Hindi sex “I and Nick jerked each other off until we came all over Abbeys chest and tits.”
Sounds just like a porn video.READERReport 2007-11-19 23:00:28that was fucking awful. go out and practice, skippy, and then come back and try to write something worth reading.READERReport 2007-11-18 16:13:13Good build up, but it ended up finishing far too quick«12» If your story is about a pool party, get laid in or around the pool. I agree: “Nice beginning, but ending sucked”. you must be a sad, lonely, desperate
