7 comments«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. redtube Please give us the rest of the story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:45it was a good story and it wasnt like the most other storys where the only thing what happens is sex its like the nam says a love story and i liked it very muchanonymous readerReport 2012-11-01 03:31:17damn, another butthead that cannot write a storyanonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 00:14:36You is wonderful, keep writing. Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» 7 comments«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. Please give us the rest of the story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:45it was a good
