You could fade in and out with flashbacks, before you go into stageIII. hqporner I find that If I don’t have a backstory and reasons to write I’ll fizzle out on just bare scenes.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 22:32:59Good, but I don’t see any lesbian action as your tag suggested.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-27 16:54:43Different. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2012-11-29 04:11:48Realistic reactions and scenes. But good. Add back-story and a little character development instead of just raw scene. You could fade in and out with flashbacks, before you go into stageIII. I find that If I don’t have a backstory and reasons to write I’ll fizzle out on just bare scenes.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 22:32:59Good, but I don’t see any lesbian action as your tag suggested.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-27 16:54:43Different.
