Since it’s supposed to be a love story, I’ll come back another time. … Porn but it’d better be worth it.«12» I see a lot that what I wright ‘as well’ it changes it to ‘swell’
This problem is only in the first story, the next three chapters are better, and the last two I would think are pretty perfect.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-03 23:55:59”I would descry myself as a cool guy”
I would DESCRIBE myself as a cool guy. I’ve barely gotten through three paragraphs and have found two major spelling errors. … but it’d better be worth it.«12» Since it’s supposed to be a love story, I’ll come back another time. … 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-04 05:50:05Omg weed!?no good. as well as a couple of grammatical foul ups.
