3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs. Japanese sex People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK. it was short and the plot barely exists at all. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2004-07-17 23:39:27Where is the elaboration? So why should we be subjected to stories that are so poorly constructed? Who browses girly magazines where half the pictures are out of focus ?
