Have someone with some grammatical intelligence correct your work. Okxxx Shouldn’t it be “lovingly”?Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-26 12:36:52Yng is illglAnonymous readerReport 2016-05-31 08:49:14Mmmm i love itfamliboiReport 2016-04-01 06:42:08Great story keep it going would love to read about jonny having sex with Mrs Wiggen’s daughters – maybe even have him babysit them while Mrs W goes out«123» Have someone with some grammatical intelligence correct your work. Hey, at least you tried; and ALL kids deserve trophies just for trying.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-05 13:02:082nd sentence – “loving”? At least one mistake every other sentence. No way!!! Have someone with some grammatical intelligence correct your work. You fixed the errors in part 1?
