names an story match a bit lolanonymous readerReport 2012-12-31 15:17:06When is the next part going to be uploaded I can’t wait for the next partanonymous readerReport 2012-12-31 02:12:26Love it can’t wait for the next part«12345» names an story match a bit lolanonymous readerReport 2012-12-31 15:17:06When is the next part going to be uploaded I can’t wait for the next partanonymous readerReport 2012-12-31 02:12:26Love it can’t wait for the next part«12345» you also need a good editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-02 15:06:20You could stand a review of the use of words like ‘their’ and ‘there’. Indian sex delete this series and rewrite it adding the needed background and slowing down the action. You are murdering it. I like the story but you did ask for any criticism.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-01 13:44:50this is based on tv series revenge?
