I assume this was her first time, so where was the explanation of her hymen breaking? I assume this was her first time, so where was the explanation of her hymen breaking? eporner 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. 🙂
With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me. I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series. one small critique. one small critique. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. one small critique. one small critique. 🙂
With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me.
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