QUIT WORRIEING ABOYT THE FUCKING COMMAS AND THA GRAMMER!!!!!!!!!READERReport 2008-04-15 22:39:42Shut The Hell Up Dumbass who the hell cares about commas«12345» 6/10Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-23 13:43:12I could barely read a sentence without getting lost. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-14 12:50:19Reads like some Aussie half-assed, but it was still a good romp. Indian sex this needs a total rewrite using a good editor. Did you sleep all through English 101 or what?Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-15 23:57:34k its a fuckin sex story… SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT
