You’re stories are “NOW” 9.5/10 and as I’m about 1/2 way through them now I think they are getting better than they were before, as time progresses.Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-20 13:23:23Yeah, must agree about the double-spacing, spelling errors, poor grammar, but I DO LIKE YOUR STORIES. You have spent a lot of time writing the 200+ stories on this site; no doubt you have improved, but, yes, there is still a lot of room for further improvement. Txxx I suppose your level of education causes some problems, but you do try to make up for it with your imagination; it’s just a pity that lack of proof-reading makes the errors stand out like dog’s balls. To deny this and just stay like you are would be very sad.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-09 14:57:41Don’t you EVER proof-read
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