Please give me some good comments on how I can improve my writting technique and i will put more exciting stories up.*********************************************
PS: To all those fans of sex related jokes, i am always finding new ones and will start to post them on this site. Pornhub When i buzzed the door i found out that it was my best friend coming over to drop of my Xbox 360. she then pulled away from the kiss, dropped to her knees and pulled my shorts off. that is when she stood up, walked up to me and kissed me full on the lips. I have seen her a few times since then and everytime i see her, i have some of the best sex of my life
*****This is my first story.
