9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 22:46:49NddXwg Author, keep doing in the same way..!READERReport 2008-03-05 09:25:32Lead me to the wine cellar.READERReport 2007-03-23 23:14:07great concept but poorly articulated… Bokepindo It’s not the typical type of story we see here. better use of word play or maybe even some sort of poem style..READERReport 2005-03-13 16:18:23I think you’re story is good. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 22:46:49NddXwg Author, keep doing in the same way..!READERReport 2008-03-05 09:25:32Lead me to the wine cellar.READERReport 2007-03-23 23:14:07great concept but poorly articulated… we have true feelings involed, instead of the bull shit we read on here everyday This is 1 hot story.READERReport 2005-01-14 14:15:22This was very erotic and what does it matter about the English it was open and sincere as to how making love makes her feel.
