a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» NOTHING!! Txxx a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» Do us all a favor..put the pen down and go have some real sex…then maybe you can write about it.READERReport 2005-01-04 06:45:09rubish shitREADERReport 2004-12-28 00:03:24too many damn words. Less talkin, more action. . … A build up to what? NOTHING!! a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» NOTHING!! I skipped over everything. Less talkin, more action. . … NOTHING!! Where’s the sex? Do us all a favor..put the pen down and go have some real sex…then maybe you can write about it.READERReport 2005-01-04 06:45:09rubish shitREADERReport 2004-12-28 00:03:24too many damn words.
