C’è il suo fratellino che avrà il cazzo ancora mignon , ma crescerà intanto si fottono e godono, La vita è così breve.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-10 22:29:36pretty good, for a first draft. Bokepindo IF YOU ARE WRITING FOR YOURSELF THAT IS FINE BUT DON’T POST IT IF YOU ARE WRITING FOR THE READERS MAKE DAM SURE IT IS DONE PROPERLY OR DON’T POST IT AT ALL«1234» total waste of time trying to read this, this is a first draft only and should not have been posted remove it and do it right. really needs to be editedanonymous readerReport 2011-07-30 20:33:23needs a total rewrite and a good editor the paragraphs just keep getting longer and longer. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD
